Ol' Silver and Red
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Ol' Silver and Red, ch 12"Medeival Ohmie and the dragon Ol' Silver and Red
6 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
How terrible.This Troll can't eat Princess May. Someone has to rescue her before she gets eaten. I guess Billygoats are too smart to cross the troll bridge. I don't know why the dragon had all these jewels to begin with. Did he steal them? WHy would a a dragon need jewels?
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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How terrible.This Troll can't eat Princess May. Someone has to rescue her before she gets eaten. I guess Billygoats are too smart to cross the troll bridge. I don't know why the dragon had all these jewels to begin with. Did he steal them? WHy would a a dragon need jewels?
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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All dragons steal jewels. Why do women need jewelry? (smiley face here)
Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh no! What kind of mess is Princess May in now? She's a main character so I know you won't kill her off. Hope she can outsmart Bruke or somehow civilize him to get in touch with his human side. I liked your fun trivia about the number of teeth!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Oh no! What kind of mess is Princess May in now? She's a main character so I know you won't kill her off. Hope she can outsmart Bruke or somehow civilize him to get in touch with his human side. I liked your fun trivia about the number of teeth!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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smiley face here (number of teeth)
Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
The treasure mining seems to have gone well except for that one floating away chest. Princess May knew what that voice from under the bridge meant, but she needed to catch the floating chest. Now the troll is standing on her under the water and help better get there quickly.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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The treasure mining seems to have gone well except for that one floating away chest. Princess May knew what that voice from under the bridge meant, but she needed to catch the floating chest. Now the troll is standing on her under the water and help better get there quickly.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Help better come 'real' quick!
Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from jim vecchio
That was really leaving us demanding more! At first I thought you switched horses in the middle of the stream, but you quickly immersed Bruke into the midst of the tale. I could see the first half in a storyboard form, either for a motion picture or an illustrated version of your story.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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That was really leaving us demanding more! At first I thought you switched horses in the middle of the stream, but you quickly immersed Bruke into the midst of the tale. I could see the first half in a storyboard form, either for a motion picture or an illustrated version of your story.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much. With Ol' Silver and Red transitioning, I needed another antagonist.
Thank you for the six stars!
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Am looking forward to more!
Comment from Ric Myworld
I got tickled thinking about trying to hold a slippery fish and bite into it at the same time without it jumping free or smacking me upside the head. Thanks for sharing your entertaining chapter.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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I got tickled thinking about trying to hold a slippery fish and bite into it at the same time without it jumping free or smacking me upside the head. Thanks for sharing your entertaining chapter.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Thank you. I always appreciate your reviews.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Wayne
So now that the dragons disabled, there needs to be another villain and it's this troll
The troll has always been the subject of fairytales and what not. Always in a bad way and now trolls on the Internet also bad.
Now this Bluke. Is the new villain. I am predicting that princess May escapes from Bluke. I think she is one of the stars of the novel and so we can't afford to lose her
I think that the dragon will reappear at some point, but not be as much a danger as it was before
What good will all of those riches be if May is consumed by the troll? They would feel hollow to everyone because they would've caused her death
I enjoyed reading your book chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Hi, Wayne
So now that the dragons disabled, there needs to be another villain and it's this troll
The troll has always been the subject of fairytales and what not. Always in a bad way and now trolls on the Internet also bad.
Now this Bluke. Is the new villain. I am predicting that princess May escapes from Bluke. I think she is one of the stars of the novel and so we can't afford to lose her
I think that the dragon will reappear at some point, but not be as much a danger as it was before
What good will all of those riches be if May is consumed by the troll? They would feel hollow to everyone because they would've caused her death
I enjoyed reading your book chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your very nice review.