Comment from RJ Heritage

Exceptional

This is a very well written and presented free verse poem. The motif compliments the imagery very well. Your use of black, white and grey as the background palette, written on with red and brighter hues, create a balance of the macabre and purity of the love expressed beyond the grave. I read quite a few of Allan Poe's writings, and I also like Wordsworth. This poem reminds me of, Wordsworth's, "A slumber did my spirit seal."
Well done.
RJ

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024

I read Wordsworth's, "A slumber did my spirit seal.", it does have that woeful feeling.

Wordsworth's, "A slumber did my spirit seal." Poem is lovely and does have that woeful emotion. I'm honored my poem reminded you of such excellent poem.

Thank you very much, RJ. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

Gypsy 😊

reply by RJ Heritage on 18-Aug-2024

My pleasure
RJ

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

cool history about what inspired this great free verse with excellent imagery and smooth flow weaving through the lines... nice!!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024

Thank you very much, Shelley 😊

Gypsy

Comment from Katiemae1977

Excellent

So much to love here Gypsy.
Moon ferries kisses
Remeberance waves
This is a really well done free verse that has a lovely Gothic feel to it.
Bravo!
Katiemae1977

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024

Thank you very much, katiemae

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I guess the lovers remain connected even if separated by death. Somehow I don't think angels "envy" as they don't have any sexuality. Jesus said that angels and all of us beyond the grave won't have that male/female thing.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024

I was using a reference from 'Annabel Lee's poem. I deleted that last stanza... it wasn't necessary.

Thank you, Big Sister. I hope you are having a great weekend... not too busy. Micaela went to a concert with her girlfriend and Nick went to bed with Atticus, so I am watching Muffin. I don't think she needs it but my kids are spoiling her. lol

Love,

MariVal

reply by lyenochka on 17-Aug-2024

Soon you'll be buying doggie treats! 😻💞

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024

Micaela and nick are spoiling muffin she has plenty of treats and all kinds of stuff you can imagine.... like shoes!. That one is ridiculous. It's clear she was abused and has taken her a while to get comphortable. She wouldn't jump on the sofa or back until yesterday, we were worried she couldn't. We took her to a groomer and we found she has scabs on her head. She always wants our food, she was probably feed scraps.

We are all happy to have her.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Gypsy, This is a very beautiful free verse poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words; lovely imagery and I love the different colors in your words. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024

Thank you very much, Teri

Gypsy

reply by Teri7 on 17-Aug-2024

you are so welcome!😊💕❤️