Willing Hearts
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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Barbara,
I got behind again, but I really enjoyed this chapter. Sami really got a chance to show her vinegar! She didn't let Galvin rattle her. I think she was angry about the eyes comment as much as anything. What a terrible experience for her. First, her student wasn't found and Chen got away, then Galvin swooped in to stir up trouble, but Sami was strong and made him storm off.
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Hi Barbara,
I got behind again, but I really enjoyed this chapter. Sami really got a chance to show her vinegar! She didn't let Galvin rattle her. I think she was angry about the eyes comment as much as anything. What a terrible experience for her. First, her student wasn't found and Chen got away, then Galvin swooped in to stir up trouble, but Sami was strong and made him storm off.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Thank you. I appreciate you.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Barbara,
This is a nice continuation of your story. Your chapter is well/written.
I like the way you alternate short paragraphs and sentences with long ones.
A great ending leading to another chapter.
Best wishes for your series,
Barbara.
Cindy
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Barbara,
This is a nice continuation of your story. Your chapter is well/written.
I like the way you alternate short paragraphs and sentences with long ones.
A great ending leading to another chapter.
Best wishes for your series,
Barbara.
Cindy
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Yea to Sami! She should turn Gavin in when this is over. As a civilian she can say somethings they cannot. Gavin is incompetent. That is a very dangerous place to be. Karen
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Yea to Sami! She should turn Gavin in when this is over. As a civilian she can say somethings they cannot. Gavin is incompetent. That is a very dangerous place to be. Karen
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Maybe Galvin should get killed off. You want to do it tonight????
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That talk with Sami angered Galvin. Treating him as is if he was nothing. Like those great lumps did all the work. They would see different tonight! He would take down Chen. A lone operative could get in as a customer and kill Chen. You just wait and see. They would be shown up for the slackards they are. Maybe he'd swing by and get Sami to use as bait. He could think up paperwork or something as an excuse. As if he needed to. He was the one in charge! Something like that? Gavin is a retard. :-)
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LOL
Comment from Sanku
This has become complicated .Gavin 's irritation at not being able to arrest may have disruption since he is the boss. I wonder where Myra is . And what has really happened to her..
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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This has become complicated .Gavin 's irritation at not being able to arrest may have disruption since he is the boss. I wonder where Myra is . And what has really happened to her..
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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We will find Myra very soon. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Daylily
An interesting situation here, although it is always a sad thing when someone above your own job position has major weaknesses and character flaws.
You continue to offer excellent character development and that helps keep the story moving, plus readers want to stay involved. Another super chapter, Barbara. :-)
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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An interesting situation here, although it is always a sad thing when someone above your own job position has major weaknesses and character flaws.
You continue to offer excellent character development and that helps keep the story moving, plus readers want to stay involved. Another super chapter, Barbara. :-)
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, This is a six star chaser in my eyes, but to be honest they all are. I was a little on edge when I read she was going to take a walk with Baldwin. She must getting desperate to get on with her life! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Barbara, This is a six star chaser in my eyes, but to be honest they all are. I was a little on edge when I read she was going to take a walk with Baldwin. She must getting desperate to get on with her life! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. She didn't really have a choice. Baldwin ordered her too. LOL
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lol I really like how brave she was with her talking! great chapter my friend!
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Thank you. I appreciate the encouragment.
Comment from Paul McFarland
That was exciting, Barb. You have just added another item to the stew. It will be interesting to see what comes of this encounter. Will Noah be looking for a new job?
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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That was exciting, Barb. You have just added another item to the stew. It will be interesting to see what comes of this encounter. Will Noah be looking for a new job?
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
this story moved right along with some interesting parts that gave it a feeling of realism. I'm curious how Chen got away, but glad to see that Sami's friend isn't a pedophile. Well done gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Hello Barbara,
this story moved right along with some interesting parts that gave it a feeling of realism. I'm curious how Chen got away, but glad to see that Sami's friend isn't a pedophile. Well done gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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I have a feeling Chen easily walked out the door because nobody was there in time to stop him. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
Three cheers for Sami!! She really put Galvin in his place. Maybe Galvin will be looking for a new job.
Interesting chapter with Sarah's possible pregnancy that could change the dynamics of the team.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Three cheers for Sami!! She really put Galvin in his place. Maybe Galvin will be looking for a new job.
Interesting chapter with Sarah's possible pregnancy that could change the dynamics of the team.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
This chapter is well in keeping with your writing style and strong female orientated themes. I think it will greatly appeal to your target reader and give them a boost as they read. Good writing and editing.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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This chapter is well in keeping with your writing style and strong female orientated themes. I think it will greatly appeal to your target reader and give them a boost as they read. Good writing and editing.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Thank you for this kind review.