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Comment from
Earl Corp
This needs some heavy duty editing. In the second paragraph did you mean to type suspected three times in a row? The whole piece is littered with funky a's that is distracting. You also need to tighten up your spacing.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
Comment from
iDri.Luv.Jesus
Hi, you have been blessed so much, and happy for you and your family too. Thank you for all of you in the services for our great country! Plus, I totally agreed with your description about Seattle. I've been there, and the prettiest thing is the Mt. Rainier National Park. Also, I like your detail descriptions, and your lifestyle of multi-foods & multi-ethnicities. I too love traveling as much as I can, and when I can traveling, I've included the Missionary Volunteering works too. Best of luck to your Blog writing.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
reply by iDri.Luv.Jesus on 22-Jul-2024
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