Always Moving Forward
Time is in perpetual forward motion.4 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Time does continue to whisper on. I like that description of time. One of my favorite parts of Texas is the gorgeous sunsets. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Time does continue to whisper on. I like that description of time. One of my favorite parts of Texas is the gorgeous sunsets. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback. Sunsets are so relaxing and beautiful, so nice you are able to observe wonderful ones.
Comment from Mintybee
This is a good ABC poem. The words are soft and dreamlike, which really fits the subject matter. I like, "Beams of pale yellow and purple." This poem is really descriptive.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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This is a good ABC poem. The words are soft and dreamlike, which really fits the subject matter. I like, "Beams of pale yellow and purple." This poem is really descriptive.
Mintybee
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thanks for the encouraging comments. Appreciated.
Comment from GoWiSt
"Time is in perpetual forward motion.
Always Moving Forward" Then how come I can wind back my watch and clock during daylight savings time?
"Dreams may shortly come" I hope so, 'cause real life's a mess.
"Time whispers on" Good use of personification.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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"Time is in perpetual forward motion.
Always Moving Forward" Then how come I can wind back my watch and clock during daylight savings time?
"Dreams may shortly come" I hope so, 'cause real life's a mess.
"Time whispers on" Good use of personification.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Time on a watch does stop the march of time. Really doesn't matter what your watch says.
I couldn't agree more that real life right now is a mess.
Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This is an excellent example of beautiful poetry. It's so well written. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Happy writing and best wishes.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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This is an excellent example of beautiful poetry. It's so well written. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Happy writing and best wishes.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the read and the encouraging review. Appreciated.