Engrossed
50 word true story5 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This true funny piece of flash definitely made me laugh! I liked that the drug dog was sniffing out your cookie crumbs. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This true funny piece of flash definitely made me laugh! I liked that the drug dog was sniffing out your cookie crumbs. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A very cute and humorous story with a cute twisted ending. An excellent entry for the Laughter Flash writing prompt. All i can say is, if airports start replacing drug sniffing dogs with cookie sniffing dogs, I will have to stop flying! Good job.
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A very cute and humorous story with a cute twisted ending. An excellent entry for the Laughter Flash writing prompt. All i can say is, if airports start replacing drug sniffing dogs with cookie sniffing dogs, I will have to stop flying! Good job.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
this looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.
I know this is fiction, but it could happen in real life. Sometimes the TSA agents feel the sense of power and take it out on passengers.
I'm surprised they didn't check you for the food. But I guess they would've had to search you and I guess they were going to do that next.
Well written. Fun to read.
I enjoyed reading your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
this looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.
I know this is fiction, but it could happen in real life. Sometimes the TSA agents feel the sense of power and take it out on passengers.
I'm surprised they didn't check you for the food. But I guess they would've had to search you and I guess they were going to do that next.
Well written. Fun to read.
I enjoyed reading your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
Comment from RodG
This story did make me chuckle. I can visualize the security agent going through your luggage as the sniffer dog goes berserk. That last line is a terrific closer. Well done, Writer.
Rod
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This story did make me chuckle. I can visualize the security agent going through your luggage as the sniffer dog goes berserk. That last line is a terrific closer. Well done, Writer.
Rod
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
Comment from Begin Again
His sniffer wasn't firing on all cylinders. He got distracted by the smell of cookies, but then who wouldn't. Give me a chocolate chip cookie and I'm down for the count. Cute!
Smiles, Carol
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His sniffer wasn't firing on all cylinders. He got distracted by the smell of cookies, but then who wouldn't. Give me a chocolate chip cookie and I'm down for the count. Cute!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024