2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 72 "Looking for the Light".
9 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
i like the rhyme at the end rights/lights
nice imagery and smooth flow from line to line
with a comforting feeling of safety -
like the green and brown colours, too
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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i like the rhyme at the end rights/lights
nice imagery and smooth flow from line to line
with a comforting feeling of safety -
like the green and brown colours, too
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I'm not happy that you are frightened or anxious of the future, but I'm glad to know I'm not alone. Your poem focuses on the fact that knowing God is there and will help you through tough and trying times. Thank you fir posting this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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I'm not happy that you are frightened or anxious of the future, but I'm glad to know I'm not alone. Your poem focuses on the fact that knowing God is there and will help you through tough and trying times. Thank you fir posting this. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Gretchen
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Beautifully presented as ever, your verse speaks of fear and a need for reassurance in the darkness and foreboding. I like the way your font lightens at the end of the first 2 stanzas and wondered if it might be appropriate to do the same on the last line "is to step into the light." Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Beautifully presented as ever, your verse speaks of fear and a need for reassurance in the darkness and foreboding. I like the way your font lightens at the end of the first 2 stanzas and wondered if it might be appropriate to do the same on the last line "is to step into the light." Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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I lightened up the last two lines, I hope that looks better.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Faith doesn't mean we are dolts. Fear doesn't halt our steps. The choices are always ours. We choose to believe. This is a well written marvelously constructed poem. The picture I grand. Karen
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Faith doesn't mean we are dolts. Fear doesn't halt our steps. The choices are always ours. We choose to believe. This is a well written marvelously constructed poem. The picture I grand. Karen
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this gorgeous presentation and poem with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck with the contest. Yes, when we are down, God is the light. If we allow Him into our hearts He will guide us.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you for sharing this gorgeous presentation and poem with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck with the contest. Yes, when we are down, God is the light. If we allow Him into our hearts He will guide us.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
That is exactly right, all you have to do is to step into the light, with the incumbent Holy Spirit living within He will guide us into al, truth, well said and beautifully written dear friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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That is exactly right, all you have to do is to step into the light, with the incumbent Holy Spirit living within He will guide us into al, truth, well said and beautifully written dear friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Marival, I think I know exactly what you're referring to in this wonderful poem. I am at your side. It's dire times, indeed. I loved your poem for the contest. It says it all. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Oh, Marival, I think I know exactly what you're referring to in this wonderful poem. I am at your side. It's dire times, indeed. I loved your poem for the contest. It says it all. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
Jesus clearly says that he is the light. He says so in the book of .John
Your poem speaks of this true fact tgat was said about two thousand years ago.
Thanks for posting.
Good luck in the contest.
RJ
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Jesus clearly says that he is the light. He says so in the book of .John
Your poem speaks of this true fact tgat was said about two thousand years ago.
Thanks for posting.
Good luck in the contest.
RJ
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Perfect remedy for the fears and worries of our time. And remember that the news wants us to worry and be afraid or angry. Let's keep at peace in His Light!!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Perfect remedy for the fears and worries of our time. And remember that the news wants us to worry and be afraid or angry. Let's keep at peace in His Light!!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Yes, that is true. I avoid the news, instead I look for funny Instagram videos or pictures.
I slept better last night. I think my lack of sleep was a combination of things. I drank diet coke and caffeine affects my medicine.
Anyway, writing helps too, and friends like you.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love and hugs
Marival