Nature's Tease
Clouds don't always mean rain.2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your haiku beautifully captures the anticipation of rain. I love how you show clouds gathering, suggesting the promise of rain without delivering! I was left with a sense of loss! haha Great job!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Your haiku beautifully captures the anticipation of rain. I love how you show clouds gathering, suggesting the promise of rain without delivering! I was left with a sense of loss! haha Great job!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you. I much appreciate your review. Your words help me understand the parts that I did right and gave me encouragement.
Comment from jessizero
This was a great entry for the writing prompt. You got the syllable count right, and you based the poem on nature. Your picture really helped to express the conditions of your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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This was a great entry for the writing prompt. You got the syllable count right, and you based the poem on nature. Your picture really helped to express the conditions of your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you. I appreciate your review. I was trying to follow the rules as exactly as I could. Your comments are encouraging.