The Tainted
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Ant Hill"A fantasy story following hunter Taya
3 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
This was another worthy installment. This one began with affairs of the seal and morphed into affairs of sex appeal. Now we know a bit more about the attractions of your characters, and I bet you'll be developing this further.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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This was another worthy installment. This one began with affairs of the seal and morphed into affairs of sex appeal. Now we know a bit more about the attractions of your characters, and I bet you'll be developing this further.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Low key but yes :)
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Continue your great writing and enjoy a blessed July 4!
Comment from Ricky1024
This chapter 38 "Ant Hill" was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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This chapter 38 "Ant Hill" was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story continues to be wonderfully engaging! The dynamic between the characters is clear. I enjoyed how you balanced the plot's progression with the characters' personal interactions, making each scene feel both meaningful. The dialogue is natural and the descriptions are detailed. Keep up the great work - your storytelling skills are really shining through!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Your story continues to be wonderfully engaging! The dynamic between the characters is clear. I enjoyed how you balanced the plot's progression with the characters' personal interactions, making each scene feel both meaningful. The dialogue is natural and the descriptions are detailed. Keep up the great work - your storytelling skills are really shining through!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story:)