The Tainted
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Siblings"A fantasy story following hunter Taya
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Comment from jim vecchio
What IS going on? I guess I'll find out soon. Now I know what happens when the two sisters meet. I didn't expect that reaction. Good writing! One small typo: As it turns out, we share I nickname.. Shoild that be "a nickname?"
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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What IS going on? I guess I'll find out soon. Now I know what happens when the two sisters meet. I didn't expect that reaction. Good writing! One small typo: As it turns out, we share I nickname.. Shoild that be "a nickname?"
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Oops, thanks
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The typo was hardly worth mentioning, but your writing is so good, I don't want anything to spoil it.
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I appreciate it when you point it out. The reader experience is much better without typos
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You can have lots of fun spotting all my typos!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
It would appear that Taya has established herself.
That's when drill sergeant Demi butt in. - (butted)
Now what's going on?! - It would be better to use words should relate the exclamation. Multiple closing punctuates are not supported by the rules of writing.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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It would appear that Taya has established herself.
That's when drill sergeant Demi butt in. - (butted)
Now what's going on?! - It would be better to use words should relate the exclamation. Multiple closing punctuates are not supported by the rules of writing.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you for letting me know