The Tainted
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Encounter Shrouded in Lies"A fantasy story following hunter Taya
3 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
Is that really Taya's sister? Why were the men lying? Are we in for another battle? All questions I look forward to seeing answered as you continue your fine opus.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Is that really Taya's sister? Why were the men lying? Are we in for another battle? All questions I look forward to seeing answered as you continue your fine opus.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you. Out of curiosity, is chapter 19 showing up?
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I guess it is because I just commented on it. Good job!
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Lol thank you :)
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Keep up your amazing work!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Interesting plot development. And very well written. Good work.
I like how you described Demi knowing that they'd been lied to.
Very realistic dialogue.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Interesting plot development. And very well written. Good work.
I like how you described Demi knowing that they'd been lied to.
Very realistic dialogue.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from bonespur
You've done a great job at pulling the reader in and wanting to keep reading to see what happens. Good job. Good luck in the contest and have a blessed day
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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You've done a great job at pulling the reader in and wanting to keep reading to see what happens. Good job. Good luck in the contest and have a blessed day
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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I don't think it's in a contest but thank you! I appreciate your review!