A walk to Remember
A poem inspired by the movie A Walk To Remember13 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. The flow and the emotion, both were very good. I enjoyed reading and I want to wish you the very best luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. The flow and the emotion, both were very good. I enjoyed reading and I want to wish you the very best luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
This is an excellent entry for the love poem contest.
I especially like the contrasting statement, "veiled, and yet known."
I also like the strength in your last stanza.
Good luck in the contest.
Cindy
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Author,
This is an excellent entry for the love poem contest.
I especially like the contrasting statement, "veiled, and yet known."
I also like the strength in your last stanza.
Good luck in the contest.
Cindy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you Cindy!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and poem to go with it.
-Your opening verses establish the situation;
the alliteration in verse two is used well to
emphasize the fact that your paths crossed.
-It sounds like he came along at the right
time and you appreciated each other
so that you had faith in your love for him.
-I like your comparison with wind.
-A very good closing verse with the
musical references showing you
will never be the same.
-A very good entry; good luck!!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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-Very nice artwork and poem to go with it.
-Your opening verses establish the situation;
the alliteration in verse two is used well to
emphasize the fact that your paths crossed.
-It sounds like he came along at the right
time and you appreciated each other
so that you had faith in your love for him.
-I like your comparison with wind.
-A very good closing verse with the
musical references showing you
will never be the same.
-A very good entry; good luck!!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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thank you so much for your thoughtful review!
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You are very welcome, Erika.
Comment from GoWiSt
"A poem inspired by the movie A Walk To Remember" Never saw this movie. What year was it released?
"Lost am I, wandering the valley of death." Oh my, what bleak, dark imagery.
"You have faith in your God's infinite plan.
You are my inspiration, my soul, my salvation" Very nice, very good.
"That I may pluck one from heaven,
And give it your name." Good metaphoric imagery.
Nice love poem. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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"A poem inspired by the movie A Walk To Remember" Never saw this movie. What year was it released?
"Lost am I, wandering the valley of death." Oh my, what bleak, dark imagery.
"You have faith in your God's infinite plan.
You are my inspiration, my soul, my salvation" Very nice, very good.
"That I may pluck one from heaven,
And give it your name." Good metaphoric imagery.
Nice love poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
It was released in 2002 and it's a great movie. I don't typically like romance films unless it's a mixed genre but this is the exception.
Here:
Set in North Carolina, "A Walk To Remember" follows the rite of passage of a jaded, aimless high school senior (Shane West) who falls in love with a guileless young woman (Mandy Moore) he and his friends once scorned. The two develop a powerful and inspirational relationship in which they discover truths that take most people a lifetime to learn
Comment from gansach
This is a lovely entry for the Love Poem competition. It has a nice flow and rhythm and that last stanza is breathtaking and beautiful. Excellent job. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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This is a lovely entry for the Love Poem competition. It has a nice flow and rhythm and that last stanza is breathtaking and beautiful. Excellent job. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)
Comment from Waterfall Poet
Beautifully done Erika. I like the graphics. Two giraffes in love.
Good job. And good luck in the "Love Poem" contest.
Keep up the good work.
Best wishes in the contest.
Wayne
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Beautifully done Erika. I like the graphics. Two giraffes in love.
Good job. And good luck in the "Love Poem" contest.
Keep up the good work.
Best wishes in the contest.
Wayne
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest. Jesus love is pure and constant no matter what. It's a hopeful beautiful message.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
"I have faith in our love.
Love like the wind.
Felt but not seen.
Veiled, and yet known."
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Excellent entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest. Jesus love is pure and constant no matter what. It's a hopeful beautiful message.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
"I have faith in our love.
Love like the wind.
Felt but not seen.
Veiled, and yet known."
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Oh that's a nice quote! Thank you for the wonderful review
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
I love the way this sounds when I read it! My favorite part was, "you are my inspiration, my soul, my salvation singing in all that I am." Great job, and well written!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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I love the way this sounds when I read it! My favorite part was, "you are my inspiration, my soul, my salvation singing in all that I am." Great job, and well written!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much :)
Comment from elainec4
a lovely work. easy to read and understand. your word usage magnified your message. my favorite lines:
Sing me the song of the stars,
A symphony of grace.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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a lovely work. easy to read and understand. your word usage magnified your message. my favorite lines:
Sing me the song of the stars,
A symphony of grace.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A Walk to Remember, takes the sense of love into the stars as this admiration and love becomes the measured within the cosmos of possibilities.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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This poem, A Walk to Remember, takes the sense of love into the stars as this admiration and love becomes the measured within the cosmos of possibilities.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you :)