Elevator Rage
Methinks the lady doth protest too much3 total reviews
Comment from RJ Heritage
The caption and words I found to be on point. To answer the question, yes, very often it is. But other times it's just too terrible to stay quiet.
Good luck in the contest.
RJ
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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The caption and words I found to be on point. To answer the question, yes, very often it is. But other times it's just too terrible to stay quiet.
Good luck in the contest.
RJ
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thanks, RJ.
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You?re welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, Elevator Rage, has the proper formatting and traps the readers in the elevator with you as the group becomes ground zero for the out-of-body emissions. Gaaa.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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This naani, Elevator Rage, has the proper formatting and traps the readers in the elevator with you as the group becomes ground zero for the out-of-body emissions. Gaaa.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thanks, Bill.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
When silent gas escapes
in a packed lift
does the vehemence of protest
identify the culprit?
These poems are hard to write. Good work overall.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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When silent gas escapes
in a packed lift
does the vehemence of protest
identify the culprit?
These poems are hard to write. Good work overall.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Nicole.