Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
A glamorous visual of a happy couple skilfully reflected in your 5-7-5 senryu-type poem. Presentation and romantic sentiment win the day for me. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
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Comment from
jessizero
This was a sweet and romantic poem for the "recently married" prompt. It is passionate without being explicit, which is good. You did a great job writing this. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
Comment from
Nicole Schmidt
I like the emotion behind this. It definitely paints a picture of inseparable love. I wish you luck with the submission and the rest of your work going forward.
Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024