2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "Tempestuous Morning".
6 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Love your free verse poems, they are so emotional and tell stories, all relationships must weather a few storms, and appreciate the calm and loving times that have been shared, beautifully written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Love your free verse poems, they are so emotional and tell stories, all relationships must weather a few storms, and appreciate the calm and loving times that have been shared, beautifully written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you very much, kym
Gypsy
Comment from juliaSjames
Beautiful and wild, Marival. "tempestuous morning" is a striking start. But I love your creative imagery throughout this write, especially in the night stanza. Always a pleasure to read your work.
Blessings, Cheryl
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Beautiful and wild, Marival. "tempestuous morning" is a striking start. But I love your creative imagery throughout this write, especially in the night stanza. Always a pleasure to read your work.
Blessings, Cheryl
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Cheryl. 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
You always do such a great job with describing passion. It adds to the feelings of the lovers as you compare the interactions to the natural forces of weather and night.
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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You always do such a great job with describing passion. It adds to the feelings of the lovers as you compare the interactions to the natural forces of weather and night.
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love,
Marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
The black and white, dark and light motif is always quite stunning. This is especially so when it is used in compliment to the written verse. I see this as the good and bad times that lovers have shared from time immemorial.
Nicely written and presented.
RJ
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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The black and white, dark and light motif is always quite stunning. This is especially so when it is used in compliment to the written verse. I see this as the good and bad times that lovers have shared from time immemorial.
Nicely written and presented.
RJ
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
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You?re welcome
Comment from shelley kaye
lovers beating hearts - i think you need an apostrophe after the S - "lovers' beating hearts"
other than that this was cool imagery
loved this image: hearts bathed in music dancing between ancient trees and silent rocks
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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lovers beating hearts - i think you need an apostrophe after the S - "lovers' beating hearts"
other than that this was cool imagery
loved this image: hearts bathed in music dancing between ancient trees and silent rocks
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. I corrected that, 😊 thanks
Gypsy
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written free verse you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written free verse you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Teri
Gypsy