Comment from
Bill Schott
This nonet, No Gun, has the proper formatting and seems to have a lot of fun with the rhyming of words that sound alike but do not necessarily form coherent meaning.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
Rhyming of words is like harmony between people. Loneliness is not fun. We are each unique, but it is also important to have something in common with others. Thank you for responding to this poem.
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
I thought your poem was so creative. I love how you wrote it with each line being shorter. That helped drive the message home. For me this was about the value of companionship and friendship. Well done!
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
Most of us, I think would suffer if we lacked companionship and friendship. Who wrote, "No man is an island."? Thank you for sharing.