Faith Intangible
What faith means to me.3 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
Faith can be described by a million beautiful words like yours, but still have no meaning for those who never experienced it. It's good to say "I believe" but Faith will guide your walks and work.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Faith can be described by a million beautiful words like yours, but still have no meaning for those who never experienced it. It's good to say "I believe" but Faith will guide your walks and work.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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True
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Faith is our victory!
Comment from Tina Crute
You've done a very difficult thing and described faith in an intriguing way. The poem feels positive and hopeful , so I might suggest a happier color or picture
No offense! Your words ring true and helpful....is why I think that. Keep writing!
Tina
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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You've done a very difficult thing and described faith in an intriguing way. The poem feels positive and hopeful , so I might suggest a happier color or picture
No offense! Your words ring true and helpful....is why I think that. Keep writing!
Tina
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you
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You're very welcome!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Erika,
This free verse is a good definition of faith. The last line is so true.
I think you should break up the long lines. They seem to break the
flow of the poem for me.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend;
Joan
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Hi Erika,
This free verse is a good definition of faith. The last line is so true.
I think you should break up the long lines. They seem to break the
flow of the poem for me.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend;
Joan
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you Joan
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No problem, Erika.
Joan