Fabric of Life
What life's made of.19 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. You said a lot and used on fifteen syllables. Great job. I'm impressed. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. You said a lot and used on fifteen syllables. Great job. I'm impressed. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you, Barbara, fir your review and compliments!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Tina,
This is a good metaphor for the way life and relationships intersect.
Good luck with the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest or your weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Hi Tina,
This is a good metaphor for the way life and relationships intersect.
Good luck with the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest or your weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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I appreciate your review of my poem and the intersecting idea. So true!
Tina
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You're very welcome, Tina.
Joan
Comment from Aussie
I wish you well with your contest entry. Using the word loom made your poem come together. Looms weave life into many things, cloth, carpets etc. And your loom is weaving the cloth of life. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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I wish you well with your contest entry. Using the word loom made your poem come together. Looms weave life into many things, cloth, carpets etc. And your loom is weaving the cloth of life. Well done.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thanks for this thoughtful review and comments. You really get the loom reference!
Tina
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I worked with carpet looms noisily working away making glorious patterns. I was in the design studio and sometimes had to walk through the factory. Kxx
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Ooh, that's so interesting!
YOU could easily write a poem about the cloth of life!
Comment from royowen
This could be mum and dad, or God and ourselves, but I do know that whether good or bad, parents have a definite affect, one would hope good, but I think it's a little bit of both, mind that could change with age, well done, Tina, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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This could be mum and dad, or God and ourselves, but I do know that whether good or bad, parents have a definite affect, one would hope good, but I think it's a little bit of both, mind that could change with age, well done, Tina, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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I like that you pointed out everyone had different trials and smiles. So true. Thus, we are made of different cloth...Hmmm...maybe later I will add to this poem with that thought you inspired! Thank you!
Tina
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Well done Tina
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Thanks!
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Welcome
Comment from jake cosmos aller
Nicely done 15-syllable poem reflecting the meaning of life, and how things are weaved together to form the fabric of our lives from disparate strands
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Nicely done 15-syllable poem reflecting the meaning of life, and how things are weaved together to form the fabric of our lives from disparate strands
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you reading and reviewing my little poem!
Tina
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Thank you reading and reviewing my little poem!
Tina
Comment from GoWiSt
"What life's made of.
Fabric of Life" Um, flesh, bones, blood, breath?
Nicely met the 15-syllable requirement for this poem contest.
Very good metaphor of our lives being woven from/by trials and smiles.
I think you should change your name to Tina 'Cute'. :-))
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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"What life's made of.
Fabric of Life" Um, flesh, bones, blood, breath?
Nicely met the 15-syllable requirement for this poem contest.
Very good metaphor of our lives being woven from/by trials and smiles.
I think you should change your name to Tina 'Cute'. :-))
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you so much! I am humbled when someone "gets" my writing. Yes, flesh and bone but also, trials and smiles,lol.
Thank you so much for this review!
I am not cute but my hubby says so anyhow:)
Tina
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Tina.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You have used your 15 syllables well with a good topic.
-A very good opening line and the theme of
weavers, as well as the concluding lines.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Tina.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You have used your 15 syllables well with a good topic.
-A very good opening line and the theme of
weavers, as well as the concluding lines.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you, Pam! I sure fo appreciate your analysis of my writing!
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Thank you, Pam! I sure fo appreciate your analysis of my writing!
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You are more than welcome, Tina.
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Just :)
Comment from Boogienights
I was less concerned about sllyable count and more focused on how creative this is. I would never had thought of this, but l certainly loved it. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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I was less concerned about sllyable count and more focused on how creative this is. I would never had thought of this, but l certainly loved it. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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I do believe it's 15 syllables but thank you. I appreciate your vote of confidence!
Comment from Sallyo
Smiles is one syllable to me and trials is two... I love this one. You manage to make a memorable image and I know that isn't easy in such a small word/syllable allowance. The picture of the two weavers is excellent and the actual picture... the silhouetted rose (or is that an anti-silhouette) is perfect.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Smiles is one syllable to me and trials is two... I love this one. You manage to make a memorable image and I know that isn't easy in such a small word/syllable allowance. The picture of the two weavers is excellent and the actual picture... the silhouetted rose (or is that an anti-silhouette) is perfect.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Wow, thanks so much! I'm humbled! I appreciate you reviewing my work!
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen-syllable poem, Fabric of Life, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that it is the ups and downs of life that build a firm foundation.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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This fifteen-syllable poem, Fabric of Life, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that it is the ups and downs of life that build a firm foundation.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thanks, Bill, for reading and reviewing my poem!