Songs of Recovery
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Sweet Relief"A collection of poems around healing.
6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiments in your free-write. Being relieved of grief gives us a rest from the pain of it and I have known these feelings. An inventive and well expressed poem to soothe the soul, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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I enjoyed the sentiments in your free-write. Being relieved of grief gives us a rest from the pain of it and I have known these feelings. An inventive and well expressed poem to soothe the soul, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the delay in reply. I'm glad it had a soothing effect, that was very much part of the intent. I really appreciate your time and I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from gansach
I enjoyed reading your poem very much. The presentation is attractive, the artwork a great illustration for your words. The emotion is deftly expressed right down to the final line which tells us why all this feeling -good, bad, happy, sad- is a relief.Well written!
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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I enjoyed reading your poem very much. The presentation is attractive, the artwork a great illustration for your words. The emotion is deftly expressed right down to the final line which tells us why all this feeling -good, bad, happy, sad- is a relief.Well written!
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the delay in reply. I really appreciate your time and I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A very poignant poem about the various feelings, emotions that we can go through, and the fact that it is better to feel than to have the 'numbing nothingness.' That was a great closing couplet, and a very good read.
well done,
cheers.
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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A very poignant poem about the various feelings, emotions that we can go through, and the fact that it is better to feel than to have the 'numbing nothingness.' That was a great closing couplet, and a very good read.
well done,
cheers.
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the delay in reply. I'm glad it had a soothing effect, that was very much part of the intent. I really appreciate your time and I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, they say that life is not all beer and skittles, and I'm bound to agree with that point of view, you've penned a superbly written and well crafted poem, the language is sunlike, and the flow and rhyme are great, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Oh yes, they say that life is not all beer and skittles, and I'm bound to agree with that point of view, you've penned a superbly written and well crafted poem, the language is sunlike, and the flow and rhyme are great, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the delay in reply. I'm glad it had a soothing effect, that was very much part of the intent. I really appreciate your time and I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem beautifully captures the depth of our emotions. I thought the imagery was especially powerful. Especially when you write about keeping sorrows bundled to the breast and kissing them with tenderness. This was a powerful poem that resonates deeply.
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Your poem beautifully captures the depth of our emotions. I thought the imagery was especially powerful. Especially when you write about keeping sorrows bundled to the breast and kissing them with tenderness. This was a powerful poem that resonates deeply.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate your time and I'm glad it came out well. I hope you have a wonderful rest of your week!
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully written, and it is presented in a very lovely manner. I enjoyed very much listening to it and it flows very well when it is read aloud I wish you the very best with all of your writing and may you have a wonderful week. Patricia .
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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This is beautifully written, and it is presented in a very lovely manner. I enjoyed very much listening to it and it flows very well when it is read aloud I wish you the very best with all of your writing and may you have a wonderful week. Patricia .
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate your time and I'm glad it came out well. I hope you have a wonderful rest of your week!