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A four line poem about long-term grief
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Comment from
Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Hull, the realization of grief and the sudden pain you feel come through the page, Hull. One day at a time is my rather useless advice
Comment Written 16-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Debbie D'Arcy
Beautifully said in these poignant and fluent lines. That final line is so powerful, illustrating how much we try to carry on despite our losses but 'sometimes' the weight of them can throw us off balance. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 16-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Michael Ludwinder
I imagine remembering a loved one's passing could be overwhelming. Your words capture this feeling so well. Your poem hit me deeply. Thank you for sharing such a raw and relatable sentiment.
Comment Written 16-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
Thank you so much for the read and review.
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