Experiencing love
A free verse poem12 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
What a beautiful expression of the ways that love has been passed down from generation to generation. You shared the comfort and peaceful love in your free verse. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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What a beautiful expression of the ways that love has been passed down from generation to generation. You shared the comfort and peaceful love in your free verse. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you for the good wishes.
Comment from harmony13
I enjoyed the read of this poem. The author's words
are clear, lovely, descriptive and creative. The poem
flows and connects well. A beautiful description of
what love is. The artwork is awesome! Hope you are having a great day!.....Maria
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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I enjoyed the read of this poem. The author's words
are clear, lovely, descriptive and creative. The poem
flows and connects well. A beautiful description of
what love is. The artwork is awesome! Hope you are having a great day!.....Maria
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Maria, thank you so much! You enjoy your weekend also.
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
You use such nice descriptive words in this poem. It gives great visuals with each word, and is beautiful because of it. It starts off nice and strong, and is summed up perfectly at the end. Great job!
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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You use such nice descriptive words in this poem. It gives great visuals with each word, and is beautiful because of it. It starts off nice and strong, and is summed up perfectly at the end. Great job!
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Jodi Ann, thank you for your validation.
Comment from Idawiesenfeld
WOW. Loved how you put this music in the background. When I started to read it with the music playing, I felt like the words were just fluttering across the page, and flowing like a river on a sunny day. It turned it into a beautiful song. Your imagery is amazing and flows so well. So many different emotions flew by me whilst reading it. It's written beautifully and I really love it. Especially loved the last line.
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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WOW. Loved how you put this music in the background. When I started to read it with the music playing, I felt like the words were just fluttering across the page, and flowing like a river on a sunny day. It turned it into a beautiful song. Your imagery is amazing and flows so well. So many different emotions flew by me whilst reading it. It's written beautifully and I really love it. Especially loved the last line.
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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My most sincere thank you for the kind words, what a treasure your six stars are for me.
Comment from gansach
This is a beautiful entry for the What is Love? competition. Your descriptions and the musical accompaniment combine to emphasize those moments in our lives that mean so much and fill us with gratitude for being able to experience them. Very nice!
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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This is a beautiful entry for the What is Love? competition. Your descriptions and the musical accompaniment combine to emphasize those moments in our lives that mean so much and fill us with gratitude for being able to experience them. Very nice!
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank for your supportive words.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine warm and loving post to show us just what it is like to experience love. These treasures in life are worth keeping in our store of memories, much enjoyed,l ove Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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A fine warm and loving post to show us just what it is like to experience love. These treasures in life are worth keeping in our store of memories, much enjoyed,l ove Dolly x
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Dolly, I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Some beautiful thoughts incorporating a range of love from family to nature, all skilfully crafted in free verse and complemented by a lovely visual and very relaxing piano music. The perfect package (I'm feeling very soothed:)) Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Some beautiful thoughts incorporating a range of love from family to nature, all skilfully crafted in free verse and complemented by a lovely visual and very relaxing piano music. The perfect package (I'm feeling very soothed:)) Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Debbie, thanks for the feedback. I have just began incorporating music on some pieces.
Comment from royowen
There are so many things that could define how and what love actually is, but one thing that binds everything is what loves actually sparks, a fire that lights a million stars. This is so beautifully written my friend, an excellent post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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There are so many things that could define how and what love actually is, but one thing that binds everything is what loves actually sparks, a fire that lights a million stars. This is so beautifully written my friend, an excellent post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Roy, you are so correct! Like fireflies illuminating the path of life.
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Good job
Comment from Nicki.B
This poem is beautifully beautifully written of such treasured memories. I can see you sitting proud and full of joy holding those thoughts. They brought a smile to my face. I love, 'tickling the cockles of an old man's heart' its so endearing. You're blesses to have such love in your life. Well done
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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This poem is beautifully beautifully written of such treasured memories. I can see you sitting proud and full of joy holding those thoughts. They brought a smile to my face. I love, 'tickling the cockles of an old man's heart' its so endearing. You're blesses to have such love in your life. Well done
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Nicola, thank you for your kind words.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautiful poem that you have written for the what is love contest. I enjoyed very much listening to it and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely week. Patricia .
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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This is a beautiful poem that you have written for the what is love contest. I enjoyed very much listening to it and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely week. Patricia .
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you Patricia 🙏🌹