Brood
Got Milk?3 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Don't you mean the last eight years? Mara is seven.
I don't think Brenda had sex with him the minute she saw him, so , eight years at least. Nice story. Funny.
Karen
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
Don't you mean the last eight years? Mara is seven.
I don't think Brenda had sex with him the minute she saw him, so , eight years at least. Nice story. Funny.
Karen
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Or maybe the milkman started his food deliveries some time 'after' (and because) he began the affair with Brenda. Thank you for reviewing
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That's too much for us to have to surmise. I edited. So can you. :-)
Comment from Julie Helms
Oopsie Daisy...definitely a good revelation story. Poor Henrik probably should have picked up on this a tad earlier. Genetics are a funny thing, but probably not three times in a row!
Julie
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
Oopsie Daisy...definitely a good revelation story. Poor Henrik probably should have picked up on this a tad earlier. Genetics are a funny thing, but probably not three times in a row!
Julie
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Haha! Thanks so much for your kind review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought you did a great job with this story. The initial shock and confusion upon realizing that his newborn son doesn't resemble him was terrific. The use of dialogue does a wonderful job of sharing what's going on here. Sounds like the the milk man needs a health talk to! Great job! This was a fun read.
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
I thought you did a great job with this story. The initial shock and confusion upon realizing that his newborn son doesn't resemble him was terrific. The use of dialogue does a wonderful job of sharing what's going on here. Sounds like the the milk man needs a health talk to! Great job! This was a fun read.
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thanks so much for your kind review.