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Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Sunrise at the Dock"Verses of personification
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Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Your last two lines are beautiful! I live near the ocean and often catch the sunrise - and the promise of a new day - on the beach. It's nice when we can slow down and take in the glory of a new day.
I find that I could give every one of your poems a six if I had an unlimited number. You're just that good.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Your last two lines are beautiful! I live near the ocean and often catch the sunrise - and the promise of a new day - on the beach. It's nice when we can slow down and take in the glory of a new day.
I find that I could give every one of your poems a six if I had an unlimited number. You're just that good.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Pam, that?s wonderful. Where we live in CT isn't far from the ocean, but I would love to be right on the beach someday. There?s just something about it, even the air.
Thank you for your review, you always make my day.
Xoxo
Jess
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We lived in Vernon, CT for 26 years; Connecticut was too expensive for us to retire there.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Jessica, this is an exceptionally written poem. I enjoyed it immensely.
Life seems to start anew at sunrise. We can only pray that each sunrise will bring peace and love. Very well written. Willie
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Jessica, this is an exceptionally written poem. I enjoyed it immensely.
Life seems to start anew at sunrise. We can only pray that each sunrise will bring peace and love. Very well written. Willie
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Willie, thank you so much for your beautiful words. I truly appreciate it.
Xo
Jess
Comment from QC Poet
Capturing the magnificent majestic land in pictures is for remembrances, being there is priceless. Thanks for sharing your beautiful photo and poem. Blessings
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Capturing the magnificent majestic land in pictures is for remembrances, being there is priceless. Thanks for sharing your beautiful photo and poem. Blessings
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Jess
Comment from jim vecchio
This was a beautiful entry and was highlighted by that spectacular photo. My wife and I enjoyed sunrise and sundown cruises and God never makes two just the same. Your words reflected the magnificence.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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This was a beautiful entry and was highlighted by that spectacular photo. My wife and I enjoyed sunrise and sundown cruises and God never makes two just the same. Your words reflected the magnificence.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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That is beautiful, Jim. I appreciate you!!!
Thank you
Xo
Jess
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Your words are beautiful!
Comment from Jim Wile
Very beautiful, Jess, and a good warning not to dwell too much on what might be, at the expense of enjoying what is. Such beautiful imagery you used to convey the beauty of the dawn with all its promise, something not to be missed because your mind is elsewhere. A good warning to us all.
Such a beautiful accompanying picture, and of course terrific rhyme and meter make this a superb poem. - Jim
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Very beautiful, Jess, and a good warning not to dwell too much on what might be, at the expense of enjoying what is. Such beautiful imagery you used to convey the beauty of the dawn with all its promise, something not to be missed because your mind is elsewhere. A good warning to us all.
Such a beautiful accompanying picture, and of course terrific rhyme and meter make this a superb poem. - Jim
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Jim, this made me smile BIG! Thank you, my friend. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And regarding the meter? I?m lucky to have learned from the absolute best!!!
Xo
Jess
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning Jessica,
I just love love love Sonnet's and your is so very beautiful.
I reviewed dear Debi's lovely birthday card that she wrote for you...So nice of her,
Lisa
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Good morning Jessica,
I just love love love Sonnet's and your is so very beautiful.
I reviewed dear Debi's lovely birthday card that she wrote for you...So nice of her,
Lisa
Comment Written 01-May-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This sonnet, Sunrise at the Dock, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers to embrace the dawn and rise with the daylight to achieve what can be done.
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This sonnet, Sunrise at the Dock, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers to embrace the dawn and rise with the daylight to achieve what can be done.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Oh Jess, this is by far one of your loveliest posts I have read in a long time,
What a beautiful sonnet and heavenly presentation and art.
You have dazzled so many, including me with your lovely way with words.
I think my favorite of the whole thing is your ending. Especially catch the coming sunrise at the dock. It brings back a memory of our cabin up in Northern Minnesota. The most beautiful country ever. But then that is my opinion. LOL
Thanks so much for this gorgeous sonnet. Lotsa love, Debi
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Oh Jess, this is by far one of your loveliest posts I have read in a long time,
What a beautiful sonnet and heavenly presentation and art.
You have dazzled so many, including me with your lovely way with words.
I think my favorite of the whole thing is your ending. Especially catch the coming sunrise at the dock. It brings back a memory of our cabin up in Northern Minnesota. The most beautiful country ever. But then that is my opinion. LOL
Thanks so much for this gorgeous sonnet. Lotsa love, Debi
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Debi, thank you so so much for this beautiful review! Made my day!
Xoxoxo
Love ya
Jess
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiment in this fine sonnet and received the message to make the most of these serene moments and never let the clock dictate to us. Fine rhymes and metre and I enjoyed your sonnet very much, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed the sentiment in this fine sonnet and received the message to make the most of these serene moments and never let the clock dictate to us. Fine rhymes and metre and I enjoyed your sonnet very much, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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I'm honored, Dolly, thank you so much!! Xo
Comment from GoWiSt
Yes, watching sunrises at docks can be an amazing spectacle. The golden brown/yellow/red hues of the sky is spectacular. And the scenes are so serene and calming.
Good reading flow and rhymes to this well crafted sonnet. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Yes, watching sunrises at docks can be an amazing spectacle. The golden brown/yellow/red hues of the sky is spectacular. And the scenes are so serene and calming.
Good reading flow and rhymes to this well crafted sonnet. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you, truly appreciated! Xo