Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What a very intriguing form, I read your poem, and then read your notes, and caught the wonderful way that your end words repeat the title, so very well done and written, an excellent read****kahpot

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

Thank you so much, kahpot!

Comment from Sallyo

Excellent

That is extraordinarily clever:-) I suggest you kill the stray quote mark in the first line but other than that, magnifique. I hadn't heard of this form or of the subject of the poem, so thanks for broadening my horizons.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024

Thank you, Sally!
I fixed my quotes and appreciate the catch on that one!

Kim

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for sharing about Alaskan history. I didn't know who Felix Pedro and I was interested in what I learned about Wada from your quoted site. That Gold Rush really was a big part of the state's history and then came the oil and natural gas! So many natural treasures in your state!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024

Hi Helen!
Even more interesting that forensics much later proved he was murdered on the 8th anniversary of his discovery. I just learned that in my reading!

reply by lyenochka on 22-Apr-2024

Oh that's awful. What greed does to people!