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Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Lust # 107"
Book of Christian Poetry/Photography
3 total reviews
Comment from
dragonpoet
Hi B & S,
This free verse can have many meanings as the description states.
It can be about lust, sin in general, maybe depression. With the word
razor I got the image of a wife shaving of beard and mustache from husband that abrades her skin.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 12-May-2024
Comment from
Mark Jackson
"Lust" is a raw and intense poem that delves into the complexities and dark undertones of human desire. The poet bravely explores the overwhelming nature of lust, its consuming power, and the often destructive consequences it can have on individuals. I would suggest in future any quote should be added to the notes section and pasting can have issues. I do believe you have a little typo crum is usually spelt crumb. Five stars it is good writing.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
Comment from
EeanBlack
Mathew also writes about forgiveness. God compels us to forgive. If we do not forgive wouldn't that send us to hell? So, if I ask you for forgiveness and it is not forthcoming, will I be putting you in a very dangerous position with regards to your soul? Sorry to ponder that, this is about your poem. Slice him up with grace is a great line guys.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
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