thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Children Playing"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I'm not sure, but "some day" might be "someday." You got the syllable count right, though. Overall, I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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I'm not sure, but "some day" might be "someday." You got the syllable count right, though. Overall, I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words and advice. I do appreciate it. I will go back and make correction. Hope you have a good day.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You've captured the innocence of children playing and having fun, while they can and should, before they grow up. Well done with your 5-7-5 poem and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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You've captured the innocence of children playing and having fun, while they can and should, before they grow up. Well done with your 5-7-5 poem and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words, I do appreciate it. I have 6 grandchildren that are growing up to fast.