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Eden (2024)

14 word poem

3 total reviews 
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a good septolet with a good topic.
-I like the opening verse about her story never ending.
-A good follow up with his point of view of the garden.
-A good entry; good luck.
-One small thing: wildest

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
    Thank you so much Pam for your kind review and for your time! - Bless
reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Feb-2024
    You are very welcome.
Comment from Yusita
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This is a very good Septolet with a profound message in its carefully written lines. It's so true. History continues repeating itself. It always does. Only some variables change but the principles are the same. Well done!

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
    Thank you so much Yusita for your kind review and for your time! - Bless
Comment from jessizero
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I think a septolet poem is supposed to be seven lines, and this one only has six. You did seem to get the word count right, though, and the picture you painted was lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
    You are my favorite jessizero in the world!! Thank you so much for your kind review and for your time - Bless You!