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Tar: Black Humor

Life counts.

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Comment from Brenda Strauser
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The poem is funny. You used good words to make the poem look and sound silly. It's nice to have poems like this, to make everyone laugh. Very good job

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
    Thank you for sharing your perspective on this poem. Laughter can save lives as long as we are not dying for a laugh.
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent entry for the silly poem contest
a little different from the others in theme.
Nice use of mono rhymes and black humor.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
    Thank you for sharing your reaction to this poem. I guess the theme of death can be funny if we realize that our lives are finite and that we need to cherish our lives.