2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "In the Blackness Behind my Eyes".
13 total reviews
Comment from aryr
The pictures were wonderful, one as a couple and the one as a single lady, Gypsy. I too have the one question, one that could rock your world. Is she really alone? Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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The pictures were wonderful, one as a couple and the one as a single lady, Gypsy. I too have the one question, one that could rock your world. Is she really alone? Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Aryr. Have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You have created a perfect romance filled with passion. Thank you for making my day by allowing me to read this. Once again, you've proven you're the queen of poetry and innocent passion.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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You have created a perfect romance filled with passion. Thank you for making my day by allowing me to read this. Once again, you've proven you're the queen of poetry and innocent passion.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you Barbara, your kind words and the exceptional six stars review mean a lot to me. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
Ah the r rapture of the holh of holies, of course a place of extreme fulfilment and joy, but somehow I don't think you're talking about the holy od holies im talking about, beautifully written blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Ah the r rapture of the holh of holies, of course a place of extreme fulfilment and joy, but somehow I don't think you're talking about the holy od holies im talking about, beautifully written blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Roy
Gypsy hugs
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Welcome
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
The picture is fantastic, but you did not credit it to anyone in your author's notes. The poetry is magnificent , but alas, I have no 6 left. Have a good weekend. Karen
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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The picture is fantastic, but you did not credit it to anyone in your author's notes. The poetry is magnificent , but alas, I have no 6 left. Have a good weekend. Karen
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Karen.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a romantic poem you have created. The templates are so gorgeous. I love how you make the images look so captivating in each of your poems. Do you ever place them in contests?
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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What a romantic poem you have created. The templates are so gorgeous. I love how you make the images look so captivating in each of your poems. Do you ever place them in contests?
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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It's not a template. I use two programs to fix the pictures and get a link for the bottom image. Then I use the fanstory advance editor. For me its fun. (*÷*)
Thank you very much, Rosemary.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This shows how it feels to be so wrapped up in love and adoration. The imagery was top notch. The action of the storm and the sky of thunder and lightning were exciting. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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This shows how it feels to be so wrapped up in love and adoration. The imagery was top notch. The action of the storm and the sky of thunder and lightning were exciting. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
I love the thought of the freedom within the desire of the innermost sanctum of the 'blackness behind your eyes'... it makes me close my eyes to make sure it is so.
You have created the perfect landscape and scene to be entangled in such passion.
How did you know lightening and thunder commands my attendance?
We sit by a lake,
your shadow floats on the water
swimming with the stars.
Does poetry get any better than that image!
The last verse has such a beauty... the ecstasy of your superlative that lingers in the air of everything divine.
A very stunning composition and presentation indeed our most talented wordsmith.
To come in and review this without the adequate rating seems so lacking on my part... but do know I find this, as I do the bulk of your posts, truly exceptional.
With our thoughts we create...
a safe rendezvous.
Warmest regards,
James.
******Star Exceptional!!!!!!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
I love the thought of the freedom within the desire of the innermost sanctum of the 'blackness behind your eyes'... it makes me close my eyes to make sure it is so.
You have created the perfect landscape and scene to be entangled in such passion.
How did you know lightening and thunder commands my attendance?
We sit by a lake,
your shadow floats on the water
swimming with the stars.
Does poetry get any better than that image!
The last verse has such a beauty... the ecstasy of your superlative that lingers in the air of everything divine.
A very stunning composition and presentation indeed our most talented wordsmith.
To come in and review this without the adequate rating seems so lacking on my part... but do know I find this, as I do the bulk of your posts, truly exceptional.
With our thoughts we create...
a safe rendezvous.
Warmest regards,
James.
******Star Exceptional!!!!!!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Hello, James, I'm so happy you came by and read this poem, my favorite so far. Sometimes I'm just the scribe, the words flow through me onto the page. It's an intuitive creative process. I'm honored that you like it.
If I had known lightning and thunder summons you, I would have done it a dozen times before lol
I don't need six stars from you, your exceptional review is what I care about.
Thank you very much for taking the time, my friend, I know it's not easy.
Con cariño,
Marival
"It is not the roaring thunder that smites, but the silent lightning" - Ivan Panin
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nice piece of Japanese poetry and I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you a very very good week. May God bless you and may you stay safe. Patricia.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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This is a very nice piece of Japanese poetry and I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you a very very good week. May God bless you and may you stay safe. Patricia.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Patricia.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That's quite a thing. The Bible speak of the "Holy of Holies" place as that place where only the High Priest can go into it once a year to pray for the forgiveness of the people. There's a heavy curtain in the temple that separates this place and that curtain got torn from the top to the bottom when Jesus was crucified. But you already knew that.
I like the intensity of the love expressed - with your Holy of Holies phrase it could even be the love of Christ and the Church.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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That's quite a thing. The Bible speak of the "Holy of Holies" place as that place where only the High Priest can go into it once a year to pray for the forgiveness of the people. There's a heavy curtain in the temple that separates this place and that curtain got torn from the top to the bottom when Jesus was crucified. But you already knew that.
I like the intensity of the love expressed - with your Holy of Holies phrase it could even be the love of Christ and the Church.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Yes, I had Jesus in my mind. I'm happy you like it, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
love this line: I feel your breath beating my heart's drum!!
a wonderful free verse about love in the rain...
good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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love this line: I feel your breath beating my heart's drum!!
a wonderful free verse about love in the rain...
good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs
