the world according to Cosmos
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "California Dreaming "entries from my blog
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
The length of this post is staggeringly long. You have no idea how boring it can get when you praise one area of California excluding all other areas that are just as important and just as vital to the overall feel of the dream of living in California. Berkeley is one town among many that knows its certain quirks and faults all its own. I live in Northern California and grew up in SoCal. The differences between the two are outrageous and have little to do with the scope of this review other than to say get over yourself!
Jesse
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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The length of this post is staggeringly long. You have no idea how boring it can get when you praise one area of California excluding all other areas that are just as important and just as vital to the overall feel of the dream of living in California. Berkeley is one town among many that knows its certain quirks and faults all its own. I live in Northern California and grew up in SoCal. The differences between the two are outrageous and have little to do with the scope of this review other than to say get over yourself!
Jesse
Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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thanks a lot for your review it was too focused on Northern California where I grew up. Valid points a bit too long should have been several shorter pieces. Food for thought. Thanks.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Wow now that was something! So many awesome and beautiful places to visit in the world. The ancient places fascinate me the most. It is nice to be able to travel the globe and visit these places. It would be even nicer if all the worst would stop too so that we could do so. Theaters gardens bowling playing cards hanging out in the park amusement rides. All of those things that we take for granted so easily could be gone. This is a great submission. I see no issues with grammar esthetics subject matter or punctuation. I think you've got a great submission and a little piece of magic here. I wish you best to luck in a grand evening!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Wow now that was something! So many awesome and beautiful places to visit in the world. The ancient places fascinate me the most. It is nice to be able to travel the globe and visit these places. It would be even nicer if all the worst would stop too so that we could do so. Theaters gardens bowling playing cards hanging out in the park amusement rides. All of those things that we take for granted so easily could be gone. This is a great submission. I see no issues with grammar esthetics subject matter or punctuation. I think you've got a great submission and a little piece of magic here. I wish you best to luck in a grand evening!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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thanks a lot
