2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 69 "~ In Your Absence ~"-
15 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
In the absence of loved one, or in the case of unrequited love, we look to the beauty and immensity of nature for comfort, and also to understand ourselves. Just like all living beings, we seek fulfillment.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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In the absence of loved one, or in the case of unrequited love, we look to the beauty and immensity of nature for comfort, and also to understand ourselves. Just like all living beings, we seek fulfillment.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from jim vecchio
I'd like it to be me the words strive for, but i guess the sky's the next best thing! Seriously, this was another colorful presentation that lured me into the gentleness and beauty of your words.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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I'd like it to be me the words strive for, but i guess the sky's the next best thing! Seriously, this was another colorful presentation that lured me into the gentleness and beauty of your words.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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I'll keep reviewing and I hope those wonderful hugs will keep coming!
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LoL. No worries...hugs will keep on coming.
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I'm very, very thankful!
Comment from aryr
This was an entraining and an educational tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were great they showed the freedom of the water/ sea. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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This was an entraining and an educational tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were great they showed the freedom of the water/ sea. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is a sense of yearning here for someone who will never show and I felt the deep emotional turmoil in these words, much enjoyed, an ambient write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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There is a sense of yearning here for someone who will never show and I felt the deep emotional turmoil in these words, much enjoyed, an ambient write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from gramalot8
I really love your poem. With your expressive words snd imagery, your readers can definitely feel the pain in your loss. And I have personally felt that pain as well. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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I really love your poem. With your expressive words snd imagery, your readers can definitely feel the pain in your loss. And I have personally felt that pain as well. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
I love how each part of nature became a part of him. And then she made it about herself. Under the sky we share the stars. This was a fabulous poem about love and wanting. Gretchen
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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I love how each part of nature became a part of him. And then she made it about herself. Under the sky we share the stars. This was a fabulous poem about love and wanting. Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from royowen
As always your choice of artwork is flawless as always, you've done a great job likewise with the outstanding with your flawless narrative, releasing a great feel with your poetry, well done Gypsy. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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As always your choice of artwork is flawless as always, you've done a great job likewise with the outstanding with your flawless narrative, releasing a great feel with your poetry, well done Gypsy. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Welcome
Comment from Navada
I really enjoyed the exploration of different senses and different forces of nature here. The striking visual images also powerfully convey the longing felt by your narrator. I liked the variation in colour from line to line which depicted a gradual development or fluctuation, replicating the movement from motion to stillness and from sea to wind to sky. Beautiful writing as always!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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I really enjoyed the exploration of different senses and different forces of nature here. The striking visual images also powerfully convey the longing felt by your narrator. I liked the variation in colour from line to line which depicted a gradual development or fluctuation, replicating the movement from motion to stillness and from sea to wind to sky. Beautiful writing as always!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Douglas Goff
Well that was quite beautiful my multi-talented friend. I really love that bottom picture you found. I thought it was a person under there but upon close inspection it looks like some type of art. Magnificent.
I loved the repetition pounding the point home.
Douglas
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Well that was quite beautiful my multi-talented friend. I really love that bottom picture you found. I thought it was a person under there but upon close inspection it looks like some type of art. Magnificent.
I loved the repetition pounding the point home.
Douglas
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from prettybluebirds
This poetry of yours has touched my heart. It is beautiful beyond words. I'm not a poet, but I do love to read good poetry, and this one surpasses most I have read. The artwork is stunning.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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This poetry of yours has touched my heart. It is beautiful beyond words. I'm not a poet, but I do love to read good poetry, and this one surpasses most I have read. The artwork is stunning.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
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