Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, yes, the rain can be a very soothing song, and when we do venture outside it can caress in its mild stages, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

There is one thing (which I have finally managed to put into words) about your writing. You make nature very real. As in a person. Sometimes they are good and sometimes they are bad. But it is always relatable. Another very cool poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, Gretchen :) I'm happy you like it.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I guess she is like the "spring rain" and her passion "drizzles" like a light rain. That would a sweet way to wake up. But the picture of that lady does not look very happy.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023

LoL. I love the picture but it's a little creepy...maybe that's why I like it. With this one the picture came first.

Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.

Love

Marival

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

sweet tanka with nice imagery
love the light drizzle kiss

smooth flow
and cool pics and colours

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

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 Comment Written 23-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

gypsy hugs

Comment from Bobby Jo

Excellent

When I think of a nice soft rain, this makes absolute sense. Thanks for sharing. Rain around here can come soft or hard, and when its hard, its a muddy mess, as I live on a dirt road.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

gypsy hugs