Say cheese
Family photo6 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
My family has dwindled down so much since I was a kid that you could sneak in a herd of hippos in our portrait and still have room! This was a very humous 20 syllable entry and hope you stop long enough for an award.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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My family has dwindled down so much since I was a kid that you could sneak in a herd of hippos in our portrait and still have room! This was a very humous 20 syllable entry and hope you stop long enough for an award.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thanks Jim
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Your entry was a portrait in perfection!
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Ha ha ha thanks. X
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thank you for this writing!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Great family picture
:)
Excellent entry for the 20 Syllables writing prompt contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Great family picture
:)
Excellent entry for the 20 Syllables writing prompt contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thanks Gypsy.
Comment from JSD
Oh very funny! Reminds me of the crocodile sandwich! A nice little amusing piece neatly encapsulated in twenty syllables. Well done. And good luck in the competition.
John
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Oh very funny! Reminds me of the crocodile sandwich! A nice little amusing piece neatly encapsulated in twenty syllables. Well done. And good luck in the competition.
John
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thanks John. So glad you like it.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent 20 syllable poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is good with a photo. You use descriptive words too.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent 20 syllable poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is good with a photo. You use descriptive words too.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thanks Alexandra. So glad you like it.
Comment from JT traveller
Very clever indeed.
Great layout. I enjoyed the humourous touch in the final word.
All in all a great effort to fit souch into twenty syllables. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Very clever indeed.
Great layout. I enjoyed the humourous touch in the final word.
All in all a great effort to fit souch into twenty syllables. Jacqueline
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thanks Jacqueline. So glad you like it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, a fun post and I laughed at this humorous play on words, love the photograph and your clever words for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Ha ha ha, a fun post and I laughed at this humorous play on words, love the photograph and your clever words for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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So glad you like it Dolly. Thanks. X