Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
A faithful rhyming poem Michelle, there is much suffering in the world and some need the practical help they are often denied, I enjoyed your fine uplifting words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
Thank you. I appreciate your reviews.
Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
This is an excellent verse inspired by faith conveying the message that, while we seem to have unavoidable suffering and division in our lives, "the last exhale" will bring about unity and triumph in the form of God's grace, Nicely done, Michelle, with some lovely imagery. Particularly like "grace-strength girds with gold cocoon." Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 23-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
Thank you so much for your encouragement and stars. I really do appreciate it.