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Comment from Lea Tonin1
It's informative and a message of salvation and hope within.. If ever come a day that would estranged from our child, that child and a coming together is required just as we are God's children and a coming together is required. This is what I see in your poem.
This poem is very well written heard from a talented hand and forethought made this a lovely submission. Couple small suggestions would be to add a picture or illustration to your poem and to raise the font up on your written text. So that the older people may enjoy it too. This will bring the eye of the committee to your poem possibly raise your rank you higher.And I wish you all the best hope your day is great!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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It's informative and a message of salvation and hope within.. If ever come a day that would estranged from our child, that child and a coming together is required just as we are God's children and a coming together is required. This is what I see in your poem.
This poem is very well written heard from a talented hand and forethought made this a lovely submission. Couple small suggestions would be to add a picture or illustration to your poem and to raise the font up on your written text. So that the older people may enjoy it too. This will bring the eye of the committee to your poem possibly raise your rank you higher.And I wish you all the best hope your day is great!
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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To Lea Tonin1
Apologies for responding so late although I did attempt a couple of times previously. PayPal I found difficult to understand. probably my age a problem.
I appreciated your comments.
Unfortunately i struggle a little with font size at times. never sure what is allowed. Also placing a picture on a poem is a struggle.
At least i can now give you Christmas greetings and wish you many more years of joy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You chose a faithful theme for this contest challenge and your belief is alive and kicking and you are praising your faith and love here, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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You chose a faithful theme for this contest challenge and your belief is alive and kicking and you are praising your faith and love here, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thanks Dolly wishing you aall the best too
Apologise for the late comment
Blessings Grahm