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Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "There's A Time/Time Again"Live the best you can.
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Comment from lyenochka
This set of poems remind me of the passage in Ecclesiastes that there is a season for everything. And even if there are times or tears and falls, we can keep "standing tall" with help from God.
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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This set of poems remind me of the passage in Ecclesiastes that there is a season for everything. And even if there are times or tears and falls, we can keep "standing tall" with help from God.
Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Thanks!
Comment from Paul McFarland
This mixed meter poem reads fairly smoothly, and I think this is one of your best efforts. The topic you have chosen is excellent and the picture goes very well with the poem.
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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This mixed meter poem reads fairly smoothly, and I think this is one of your best efforts. The topic you have chosen is excellent and the picture goes very well with the poem.
Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Thanks!
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Thanks! I am keeping the other poem the way it is.
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I still have faith in you.
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I am doing great!
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You'll be doing great when I give you six stars.
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You should
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Let me know when you want your next lesson.
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I don't want one.
Comment from shelley kaye
yup! just like the song says, there's a time for everything...
a great poem! thank you for sharing it with a cool clock, too
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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yup! just like the song says, there's a time for everything...
a great poem! thank you for sharing it with a cool clock, too
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Thanks!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written rhyming poem you have penned. It makes me think of a chapter in the Bible. The art work you chose goes very well with your words. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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This is a very well written rhyming poem you have penned. It makes me think of a chapter in the Bible. The art work you chose goes very well with your words. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Thanks!
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you are welcome!
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😊
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😊
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Please my high school graduation story needs a boost. Love you!
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I believe I reviewed your work.
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You didn't vote for me. You 😟usually do. Graduation story.
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I voted for you on another contest. I have to vote for the one that is on my heart to vote for!
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You voted for me in the back went out contest.
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I changed it.
