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Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Life's Full Of Wonderful Things"
Live the best you can.

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Comment from Paul McFarland
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You certainly have covered many of the wonderful things in life. Your meter is better than it use to be, but still needs a little work. Keep 'em coming.

 Comment Written 01-May-2023


reply by the author on 01-May-2023
    Thanks!
reply by Paul McFarland on 01-May-2023
    It's about bedtime, isn't it?
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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There is so much to appreciate about life and you have selected a few moments here to pay tribute to the things you like and appreciate, a joyful write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
    Yes, thanks!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
    Do you live in Australia?
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 30-Apr-2023
    No.
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
    Where do you live?
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 01-May-2023
    I live in England and sometimes in Spain x
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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I enjoyed reading this poem. It was full of beautiful descriptions and imagery. Your rhyming was very good too and the image matched well Good work and best wishes!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
    Thanks!