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Children And Life

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Live the best you can.

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Comment from Paul McFarland
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Again, this poem reads quite smoothly. I see that you received at least one six star rating for this poem. Keep 'em coming. You are doing fine.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
    I will.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very sweet and very well written poem children and life. You used very good descriptive words and very adorable imagery with the picture of the cute puppy. Thank you for sharing and for the smile! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
    You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It sounds like you are very aware of the local sounds in your town and pay attention to life around you here, fine end rhymes here in this noisy town, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
    Yes, thanks!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Cute simple poetry is wonderful to write. I hope you do well on this posting because it is a child's poem. Are you doing this poetry book for NaPoWriMo?

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
    Yes that is the contest it is for. I didn't think it was a child's poem.