Not What You Think
Sometimes a mom doesn't want to be disturbed.2 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
typo: Sometimes a mom doesn't want to be distrubed <-- disturbed
a twist on the van's a rockin' joke
one suggestion i have is maybe find a synonym for "rocking" for the third line? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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typo: Sometimes a mom doesn't want to be distrubed <-- disturbed
a twist on the van's a rockin' joke
one suggestion i have is maybe find a synonym for "rocking" for the third line? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thanks for the feedback I will make changes.
Comment from Cherish Adams
This cracked me up! Requirements for this writing entry have been met. That includes being humorous! Thank you for writing and sharing.
Cherish
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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This cracked me up! Requirements for this writing entry have been met. That includes being humorous! Thank you for writing and sharing.
Cherish
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thanks for the feedback. It is appreciated.