Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

This is a cute 5-7-5 write.
It makes sense to me - fall and falling leaves.
I like the play on words. Right up my alley.
Why didn't you enter it into the autumn comp? It works.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

I did but it won?t win. Too clever. How did you see this as it is supposed to be anonymous? X

reply by PoemsOfDD on 16-Apr-2023

I have 👁️ 👁️ everywhere? lol ~D🌸

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Good

Enjoyed the pun and light-hearted touch with the image and verse. Am not sure if it's correct to put words in capitals in a haiku as I think it should be more free-flowing and the words speak for themselves but, otherwise, enjoyable post adhering to the syllable count. Thanks for sharing, Debbie

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Thanks

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

I've seen a lot of entries for this contest today, but yours is the first one that has used humour. That makes it original at least, but I suspect it's not going to compete well against all the beautiful fall colours and one spicy fall cooking efforts.

And no, I don't think that's why it's called Fall, but best of luck anyway.

Steve

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Thanks Steve