Comment from
Dr. Nad
Whether this was fiction or true you clearly took us to the place of your pain and invited us to share the primal sense of fear and pain. There are questions that will never be answered. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
Thank you for reading. I appreciate your comments.
reply by Dr. Nad on 14-Feb-2023
Comment from
dellsworthpoet
This is powerful writing for such a short story. The subject is topical. The language is forceful. The image is clear. The presentation adds impact to the writing.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
Thank you for reading this story. I appreciate your comments.
reply by dellsworthpoet on 14-Feb-2023