Death By Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Death By Murder Chap 28"A jewel heist, rival gangs and a cold case.
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm sure I read this chapter, but for some reason I never managed to write you a review. My head doesn't belong to me any more. Sorry, Carol.
I think Crissy needs to keep her head way down, because she doesn't know what she's gotten herself into. But I'm sure she'll go headlong into it, without another thought. At least she did one thing right in getting Hank and Emmy involved.
I hope you had a nice Christmas, and had no more troubles to ruin it. And, I hope you are no where near that nasty cold weather we're seeing on the T.V. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, dear friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xx
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I'm sure I read this chapter, but for some reason I never managed to write you a review. My head doesn't belong to me any more. Sorry, Carol.
I think Crissy needs to keep her head way down, because she doesn't know what she's gotten herself into. But I'm sure she'll go headlong into it, without another thought. At least she did one thing right in getting Hank and Emmy involved.
I hope you had a nice Christmas, and had no more troubles to ruin it. And, I hope you are no where near that nasty cold weather we're seeing on the T.V. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, dear friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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I hope you have found enjoyment and peace during the Holiday Season and you are ready to raise the pen and charge forward into the New Year filled with creativity and blessings.
Yes, the cold deep freeze visited and my water pipes froze...but it's warmer now (a whopping 23 degrees) and I have water again.
May the light shine bright on you and yours. I wish you joy, peace, happiness and love in 2023, Happy New Year with love...Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's always nice to tune in to the writing of a resilient senior citizen and her magical way with words. Of course, your a senior who this teenager at heart sixty-times over, screaming "never grow up, never grow up, never grow up," can always relate to. LOL. Thanks for sharing. And I hope you have a Wonderful Holiday! Merry Christmas! Ric
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It's always nice to tune in to the writing of a resilient senior citizen and her magical way with words. Of course, your a senior who this teenager at heart sixty-times over, screaming "never grow up, never grow up, never grow up," can always relate to. LOL. Thanks for sharing. And I hope you have a Wonderful Holiday! Merry Christmas! Ric
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
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I hope you have found enjoyment and peace during the Holiday Season and you are ready to raise the pen and charge forward into the New Year filled with creativity and blessings.
Yes, the cold deep freeze visited and my water pipes froze...but it's warmer now (a whopping 23 degrees) and I have water again.
May the light shine bright on you and yours. I wish you joy, peace, happiness and love in 2023, Happy New Year with love...Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Crissy is stubborn and fearless like your other female protagonists. I like how even the bad guys like Smythe have a moment of repentance during that fleeting moment before death. Great that Costello didn't get to Rudy. Hope Emmy and Hank meet up with Crissy before she gets into too much trouble!
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Crissy is stubborn and fearless like your other female protagonists. I like how even the bad guys like Smythe have a moment of repentance during that fleeting moment before death. Great that Costello didn't get to Rudy. Hope Emmy and Hank meet up with Crissy before she gets into too much trouble!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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I hope you have found enjoyment and peace during the Holiday Season and you are ready to raise the pen and charge forward into the New Year filled with creativity and blessings.
Yes, the cold deep freeze visited and my water pipes froze...but it's warmer now (a whopping 23 degrees) and I have water again.
May the light shine bright on you and yours. I wish you joy, peace, happiness and love in 2023, Happy New Year with love...Carol
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Oh no! Did the pipes burst?
Hope everything is back to normal now.
Happy New Year!!
Comment from Shirley McLain
Excellent chapter, and you keep moving the story forward. I'm anxious to see what happens with the diamonds. You did a great job. Enjoy your evening. Shirley
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Excellent chapter, and you keep moving the story forward. I'm anxious to see what happens with the diamonds. You did a great job. Enjoy your evening. Shirley
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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I hope you have found enjoyment and peace during the Holiday Season and you are ready to raise the pen and charge forward into the New Year filled with creativity and blessings.
Yes, the cold deep freeze visited and my water pipes froze...but it's warmer now (a whopping 23 degrees) and I have water again.
May the light shine bright on you and yours. I wish you joy, peace, happiness and love in 2023, Happy New Year with love...Carol
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. Pieces are beginning to fall into place. The hook at the end wants me to keep reading. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
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This is another excellent chapter. Pieces are beginning to fall into place. The hook at the end wants me to keep reading. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
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I hope you have found enjoyment and peace during the Holiday Season and you are ready to raise the pen and charge forward into the New Year filled with creativity and blessings.
May the light shine bright on you and yours. I wish you joy, peace, happiness and love in 2023, Happy New Year with love...Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Terry realised too late what a mess he'd got into. However it was unfortunate being killed by that truck, perhaps an unfortunate coincidence. However Crissy will still be in danger from Costello, and any article she writes will locate her and bring her into further danger.
Wendy
Backedout" = "backed out"
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Terry realised too late what a mess he'd got into. However it was unfortunate being killed by that truck, perhaps an unfortunate coincidence. However Crissy will still be in danger from Costello, and any article she writes will locate her and bring her into further danger.
Wendy
Backedout" = "backed out"
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
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I hope you have found enjoyment and peace during the Holiday Season and you are ready to raise the pen and charge forward into the New Year filled with creativity and blessings.
May the light shine bright on you and yours. I wish you joy, peace, happiness and love in 2023, Happy New Year with love...Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Every chapter is action packed and cleverly ends leaving the reader with questions about what happens next. All of your characters are realistic and have characteristics of people we know. You give enough detail about each person that the reader can recognize the type of person they are. We all know an energetic Crissy type. Even Brandi has her own personality that we can recognize. I enjoy melting into the world of your characters waiting to see what they are going to do. The whole story is captivating.
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Every chapter is action packed and cleverly ends leaving the reader with questions about what happens next. All of your characters are realistic and have characteristics of people we know. You give enough detail about each person that the reader can recognize the type of person they are. We all know an energetic Crissy type. Even Brandi has her own personality that we can recognize. I enjoy melting into the world of your characters waiting to see what they are going to do. The whole story is captivating.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
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You have put a smile on my face as we close out this difficult year and I pray I can continue to met your expectations and bring a smile to you in 2023 as well. Thank you so much.
Happy New Year
Carol
Comment from BethShelby
For some reason I keep getting the characters in your last novel confused with these. I was think Hank and Emmy were a couple who worked together but had been marrried many years. I pictured them as much older than Garth. I think you told me the time frame of this is earler. What is the date this story is taking place? Other than that I'm triying to understand how Garth fits into this. He and Hank used to work together some of the time. Garth was the goog-looking flirt. I'll get it straight eventually.
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For some reason I keep getting the characters in your last novel confused with these. I was think Hank and Emmy were a couple who worked together but had been marrried many years. I pictured them as much older than Garth. I think you told me the time frame of this is earler. What is the date this story is taking place? Other than that I'm triying to understand how Garth fits into this. He and Hank used to work together some of the time. Garth was the goog-looking flirt. I'll get it straight eventually.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
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I hope you have found enjoyment and peace during the Holiday Season and you are ready to raise the pen and charge forward into the New Year filled with creativity and blessings.
May the light shine bright on you and yours. I wish you joy, peace, happiness and love in 2023, Happy New Year with love...Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
I like how you have so many characters and can keep them all straight in the reader's mind. I'm still reading and still enjoying this terrific story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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I like how you have so many characters and can keep them all straight in the reader's mind. I'm still reading and still enjoying this terrific story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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I hope you have found enjoyment and peace during the Holiday Season and you are ready to raise the pen and charge forward into the New Year filled with creativity and blessings.
May the light shine bright on you and yours. I wish you joy, peace, happiness and love in 2023, Happy New Year with love...Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
It seems that everyone associated with the diamond heist in any way ends up dead or severely injured. I hope Hank and Emmy will be safe, and Chrissy also. She's already been run off the road. Good chapter.
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It seems that everyone associated with the diamond heist in any way ends up dead or severely injured. I hope Hank and Emmy will be safe, and Chrissy also. She's already been run off the road. Good chapter.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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I hope you have found enjoyment and peace during the Holiday Season and you are ready to raise the pen and charge forward into the New Year filled with creativity and blessings.
May the light shine bright on you and yours. I wish you joy, peace, happiness and love in 2023, Happy New Year with love...Carol
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Thank you for your lovely greeting and wishes for 2023. Prayers for peace and joy for you also. I hope 2023 will be a much better year for you. Blessings. Carol
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