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Time to eat!
2 total reviews
Comment from
Liz O'Neill
This has many good images making thereader picture the setting, plot and characters all a flurry. Then it slows down ro reveal this is a fantasy poem. "the troll dreams of his TASTY GOAT DATE!"
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
Yes, I wanted a good hook at the end. Thank you!
reply by Liz O'Neill on 01-Nov-2022
Comment from
Dr. Von
Such beautiful writing for a simple poem. This piece is made rich by your rhyme scheme and your artistry. Your message is deliberate and fun. The word choices are solid. Good work.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
Thank you Sir! You are always so encouraging my friend. I wondered if I hadn?t used the word "so" too often but it just seemed to fit. Good times!
reply by Dr. Von on 01-Nov-2022
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