Mother's Heartbreak
God answered her heartbreaking prayer..4 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
I've been there at that moment and felt the emotions wrapped in your words. It's impossible to watch your child slip away, but there is nothing you can do. It remains in God's hands. Wonderful choice of words.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
I've been there at that moment and felt the emotions wrapped in your words. It's impossible to watch your child slip away, but there is nothing you can do. It remains in God's hands. Wonderful choice of words.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your read and understanding review. Much appreciated.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
You now have 6 votes.
The words given were not easy and most entries just sounded off.
You narrative on the contrary, made sense and flowed well.
Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
Ciao!
You now have 6 votes.
The words given were not easy and most entries just sounded off.
You narrative on the contrary, made sense and flowed well.
Well done!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for the read and encouraging review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You used the required words well in context to tell your short story. I enjoyed reading it, though poignant. Your image choice is a great pairing with your well thought out story.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
You used the required words well in context to tell your short story. I enjoyed reading it, though poignant. Your image choice is a great pairing with your well thought out story.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Appreciated.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello HarryT a fantastic Friday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 42 word Spiritual fiction entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
Hello HarryT a fantastic Friday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 42 word Spiritual fiction entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thanks, 13th, for the read and encouraging review.