To Ride a Unicorn
A poem42 total reviews
Comment from Mary Harrington
Love this! This poem kept me interested the whole time. I have never imagined myself riding a unicorn, but after reading this, I see the appeal. :) Great work!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Love this! This poem kept me interested the whole time. I have never imagined myself riding a unicorn, but after reading this, I see the appeal. :) Great work!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed this.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Such a lovely and masterful poetic offering, Yvonne.
I was not able to read and review when you initially posted, but your words a far more deserving than five stars.
Always had a soft spot for unicorns... :)
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Such a lovely and masterful poetic offering, Yvonne.
I was not able to read and review when you initially posted, but your words a far more deserving than five stars.
Always had a soft spot for unicorns... :)
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. It sorta wrote itself.
Comment from Irish Rain
It most certainly is, and what isn't, will be revealed in time, not ours, His. I just love this, it is beautifully written, Blessings...
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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It most certainly is, and what isn't, will be revealed in time, not ours, His. I just love this, it is beautifully written, Blessings...
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much, Miss Irish. I'm so happy you like it. That means a lot to me.
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Happy New Year!!!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Yvonne, beautifully penned, beautifully said, especially:
for everything we need to know
is in God's Holy Word.
Y, you have great imagery throughout this poem. You made me feel as if I was sitting high above in the midnight sky.
Of special note:
I'd dash around the universe
and spin on Saturn's rings,
and bask in silver moonlight
while a choir of angels sings.
(I can see it, and I can hear the choir of angels sing.
Just beautiful)
Silky rhyming within. Well-chosen artwork. A pleasure to read. This poem made me smile. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Hello Yvonne, beautifully penned, beautifully said, especially:
for everything we need to know
is in God's Holy Word.
Y, you have great imagery throughout this poem. You made me feel as if I was sitting high above in the midnight sky.
Of special note:
I'd dash around the universe
and spin on Saturn's rings,
and bask in silver moonlight
while a choir of angels sings.
(I can see it, and I can hear the choir of angels sing.
Just beautiful)
Silky rhyming within. Well-chosen artwork. A pleasure to read. This poem made me smile. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. You make me feel like a million dollars.
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You are a million dollars! Xo. M
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Awww, stop. You'll make my head swell. Seriously, thank you so much.
Comment from godlucifer
i think people imagine living in the universe at some point in there life span. maybe god can make this belief at some point in the future. your poem was well crafted. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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i think people imagine living in the universe at some point in there life span. maybe god can make this belief at some point in the future. your poem was well crafted. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is Awesome. A beautifully written poem with a nice flow and rhyme scheme. Great photo choice to compliment your words. Nice overall presentation. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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This is Awesome. A beautifully written poem with a nice flow and rhyme scheme. Great photo choice to compliment your words. Nice overall presentation. Nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you for this great review!
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
This poem was definitely poetic...entertaining. Painting a very vivid picture of your journey through outer space...which put your amazing talents on full display. And from beginning to the end, you had me captivated. Keep Writing
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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This poem was definitely poetic...entertaining. Painting a very vivid picture of your journey through outer space...which put your amazing talents on full display. And from beginning to the end, you had me captivated. Keep Writing
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much for the lovely comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the theme of riding the unicorn
to "learn the stars' mystique."
-Then figure you will figure out much more.
-But then the fantasy turned to realizing
what was really important to do
to guide you in life.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the theme of riding the unicorn
to "learn the stars' mystique."
-Then figure you will figure out much more.
-But then the fantasy turned to realizing
what was really important to do
to guide you in life.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you, Pam. That poem sort of took a turn of its own at the end.
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You are welcome, Yvonne, sometimes poems do that😊
Comment from Kooky Clown
Thanks for sharing this poem as I really enjoyed reading it and thought that it had a nice rhythm to it. I am not an expert on the terms so perhaps I mean meter but what ever I enjoyed it .
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thanks for sharing this poem as I really enjoyed reading it and thought that it had a nice rhythm to it. I am not an expert on the terms so perhaps I mean meter but what ever I enjoyed it .
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you. I'm happy you like it.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Great ending, Yvonne. The first three stanzas set the reader up for something entirely different. I would like to dash around the universe on a unicorn.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Great ending, Yvonne. The first three stanzas set the reader up for something entirely different. I would like to dash around the universe on a unicorn.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Wouldn't that be an adventure! Thank you, Paul.
