Revenge
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I hope she gets through to the team, and Samantha. I don't think Charles will hurt her, I don't think he's quite as bad as Drake Lexington. I hope he's not, anyway. My stomach is still in my mouth, Carol!! Next part. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I hope she gets through to the team, and Samantha. I don't think Charles will hurt her, I don't think he's quite as bad as Drake Lexington. I hope he's not, anyway. My stomach is still in my mouth, Carol!! Next part. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I hope she gets through to the team, and Samantha. I don't think Charles will hurt her, I don't think he's quite as bad as Drake Lexington. I hope he's not, anyway. My stomach is still in my mouth, Carol!! Next part. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I hope she gets through to the team, and Samantha. I don't think Charles will hurt her, I don't think he's quite as bad as Drake Lexington. I hope he's not, anyway. My stomach is still in my mouth, Carol!! Next part. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Wow! When you create villains, you know how to make them really sinister. Plus, your story never lets up on the drama. When Jaz got away from James, Pow, Charles was on the other side of the door to capture her. Hopefully, he won't be as cruel as James.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Wow! When you create villains, you know how to make them really sinister. Plus, your story never lets up on the drama. When Jaz got away from James, Pow, Charles was on the other side of the door to capture her. Hopefully, he won't be as cruel as James.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Though it sounds like I am complaining because I can't catch up.... well, I guess I am, but it doesn't change how much I appreciate your support and continued encouragement. Thank you as always.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Every minute of Jaz's imprisonment, I'm expecting the to ratchet up to a new level, but hopefully she'll get rescued before the naughty happens. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Every minute of Jaz's imprisonment, I'm expecting the to ratchet up to a new level, but hopefully she'll get rescued before the naughty happens. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I thank you for reading, supporting me and always for your kindness. Without my FanStory family, I am not sure where I would be.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
So, Jasmine is in the mansion and has been there all the time, but I'm glad he didn't get his hands on her, perhaps Charles has a little bit more humanity than hatred infused James. Poor Marianne hearing the screams of Jasmine is jarring her a lot. Well done Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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So, Jasmine is in the mansion and has been there all the time, but I'm glad he didn't get his hands on her, perhaps Charles has a little bit more humanity than hatred infused James. Poor Marianne hearing the screams of Jasmine is jarring her a lot. Well done Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I thank you for reading, supporting me and always for your kindness. Without my FanStory family, I am not sure where I would be.
Hugs, Carol
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We?re here Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, these guys are really sinister. Good to know Jaz is actually still alive, but I fear for both her and Allie. One suggestion: She screamed...as he drug her (DRAGGED her). Good writing. Carol
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Wow, these guys are really sinister. Good to know Jaz is actually still alive, but I fear for both her and Allie. One suggestion: She screamed...as he drug her (DRAGGED her). Good writing. Carol
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I thank you for reading, supporting me and always for your kindness. Without my FanStory family, I am not sure where I would be.
Hugs, Carol
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Friends that become like family are a blessing. Hugs back! Carol
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol. I sure hope Marian can come to Jasmiine's rescue. I don't know, how probable that will be. But, meanwhile you sure know how to keep us in suspense. Well written, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Hi Carol. I sure hope Marian can come to Jasmiine's rescue. I don't know, how probable that will be. But, meanwhile you sure know how to keep us in suspense. Well written, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I thank you for reading, supporting me and always for your kindness. Without my FanStory family, I am not sure where I would be.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Marian is going to get herself in some serious trouble if she's not careful. I know she's TRYING to be discreet and quiet, but still... there's this author who keeps us all in suspense and always does the unexpected - so forgive me for WORRYING!!!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Carol,
Marian is going to get herself in some serious trouble if she's not careful. I know she's TRYING to be discreet and quiet, but still... there's this author who keeps us all in suspense and always does the unexpected - so forgive me for WORRYING!!!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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It appears I will never catch up on these reviews, but I am trying. As always, I am grateful for your support and encouragement. Thank you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I sure hope Marian can come to Jasmine's rescue and soon. You did a good job writing this post. The dialogue and then action seems very realistic. I sure hope Garth is able to make sure Allie is safe.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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I sure hope Marian can come to Jasmine's rescue and soon. You did a good job writing this post. The dialogue and then action seems very realistic. I sure hope Garth is able to make sure Allie is safe.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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I'm afraid we might face a rocky road if James has his way. He's an evil man and is quite determined to get the upper hand. I hope the good guys will grab on to their white hats and save the day.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
Too bad Charles was there to rescue James! Poor Jaz has no idea why she's being treated so badly, and James just stretches the torture out. I can't wait for the "tomorrow", Carol. Another excellent chapter.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Too bad Charles was there to rescue James! Poor Jaz has no idea why she's being treated so badly, and James just stretches the torture out. I can't wait for the "tomorrow", Carol. Another excellent chapter.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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It appears I will never catch up on these reviews, but I am trying. As always, I am grateful for your support and encouragement. Thank you!
Hugs, Carol
