Showers
a 5-7-5 poetic form43 total reviews
Comment from karenina
It is, indeed the little things... Congratulations on being recognized as second place in this contest! Another little blessing! Love when that happens!
Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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It is, indeed the little things... Congratulations on being recognized as second place in this contest! Another little blessing! Love when that happens!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Oh, Karenina... thank you! It IS the little things that make the difference. I appreciate your lovely comments!
Melissa
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Thanks for reminding me... Sometimes I can't see the forest for the trees!
Karenina
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Showers, has the right set up and finds the joy and beauty in whatever life sends our way, which can be appreciated.....
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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This 5-7-5, Showers, has the right set up and finds the joy and beauty in whatever life sends our way, which can be appreciated.....
Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Thanks so very much, Bill!!
Melissa
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was fantastic. Loved that magic mushroom (smile). Loved comparing the mushroom to "unexpected blessings."
Excellent imagery, visuals and artistic presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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This was fantastic. Loved that magic mushroom (smile). Loved comparing the mushroom to "unexpected blessings."
Excellent imagery, visuals and artistic presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review on this short one. I am so glad you liked it!!
Melissa
Comment from Ritasher
You say all that is needed in simple words - love it! I like how well you have chosen the picture which both suits the word "showered" and shows some little beautiful miracles of the world :) It's the little things that make our lives happy!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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You say all that is needed in simple words - love it! I like how well you have chosen the picture which both suits the word "showered" and shows some little beautiful miracles of the world :) It's the little things that make our lives happy!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Hi. Thank you so much. I was driving on the edge of TS Elsa yesterday and the rain pelted my windshield and I thought it looked jagged? hence the inspiration. :). Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from amahra
I love the artwork. Is it yours? Your "Five, seven, five poem is not only well crafted but very meaningful. These poetry contest bring out the best writers, you included. Great job.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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I love the artwork. Is it yours? Your "Five, seven, five poem is not only well crafted but very meaningful. These poetry contest bring out the best writers, you included. Great job.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much amahra for your lovely comments!!
Melissa
Comment from Raul1
It is true that we are blessed with the little things that count the most. Interesting poem. Excellent work! Well executed poetry. Best wishes in the contest! I like it.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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It is true that we are blessed with the little things that count the most. Interesting poem. Excellent work! Well executed poetry. Best wishes in the contest! I like it.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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Hello Raul. Thank you so very much! So glad you enjoyed it!!
Melissa
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You're welcome!
Comment from elchupakabra
I'm feeling sorry for the delivery person I ordered food from as it's pouring out tonight and unlike the snail, I don't see them hiding under mushrooms (at least I have a porch). Great work on this piece, good luck in the contest. Later daze.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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I'm feeling sorry for the delivery person I ordered food from as it's pouring out tonight and unlike the snail, I don't see them hiding under mushrooms (at least I have a porch). Great work on this piece, good luck in the contest. Later daze.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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Thanks so very much, Rigatoon, I am so glad you like it. I can spell Rigatoon and cannot even begin to pronounce your given handle. LOL.
Melissa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Showers
by Sugarray77
Great entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. It's the precious little things in life that life better.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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Showers
by Sugarray77
Great entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. It's the precious little things in life that life better.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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Thank you so very much, Gypsy!! I really appreciate your lovely thoughts on this verse :)
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
A lovely thought, We should stop and remember those little things that can mean so much. "Showered" is an excellent word to use. Sometimes showers can come unexpectedly, and they can be a pleasant relief after heat and dry spells. If we've been having a difficult day, it's great to be "showered" with some unexpected kindness. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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A lovely thought, We should stop and remember those little things that can mean so much. "Showered" is an excellent word to use. Sometimes showers can come unexpectedly, and they can be a pleasant relief after heat and dry spells. If we've been having a difficult day, it's great to be "showered" with some unexpected kindness. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 08-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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Hello Judi. Thank you for your lovely comments on this verse. Much appreciated, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from Ulla
Ah, Melissa, this is a lovely 5-7-5 poem. It just says it all. Yes, it's certainly the small things which makes the whole difference
I loved your poem. In so few words you say it all and it has such great imagery. Good luck with this little gem. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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Ah, Melissa, this is a lovely 5-7-5 poem. It just says it all. Yes, it's certainly the small things which makes the whole difference
I loved your poem. In so few words you say it all and it has such great imagery. Good luck with this little gem. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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Hi Ulla. Thank you for offering your comments on this short verse. So appreciated!!!
Melissa
