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Poems of Random wandering; an inward look.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Iza Deleanu
I love the sincerity of this line, it touched my soul: 'ach one built with care while traveling from the birth to golden days.
Or, wandering aimlessly, like an Albatross*, in the memory lanes." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
Iza: I am so glad that feelings behind the words reach your heart. I appreciate the comment and rating very much. Thank you and do visit my portfolio and read similar poems in my book,' Random Reflections.' Thank you.
Comment from
Erika Seshadri
What an amazing poem. I love the depth of the subject.
I don't know, looks like you left something out in the sentence. Maybe a dash where the hyphen and space are???
Some were dear to my heart, others- best forgotten.
vs.
others--best forgotten.
??
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
Erica: You are absolutely right about the dash. I don't have MS Word and I couldn't find the 'Dash' symbol in the 'insert' tab of Open Office 4 software. I am delighted my poem touched your feelings. Read more of such in my poetry book, 'Random Reflections.' It is in my portfolio. Appreciate your rating.
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