Self Improvement Poetry posted January 9, 2019


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Falling Rain

by kahpot

The sun shines down behind falling rain
to conquer clouds that flood our plain
while containing life's supply
retrieving to the sky
in vanquished vessels
new life nestles
falling rain
nature's
gain



Nonet Poetry Contest contest entry

Recognized

#1258
2019


My thoughts on the Sun, moisture and evaporation, a continuous cycle
Also wanted to try this form, Wow it's hard- but fun
And many thanks to GaliaG for the beautiful artwork
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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