General Poetry posted January 3, 2019 Chapters:  ...480 481 -482- 483... 


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A chapter in the book Little Poems

Little Turtle

by Treischel

From an egg, deep in mud
the Mississippi Turtle comes.
It leaves its empty shell
to clamber forth through slimy crud,
as warm sunlight welcomes
another reptile born to dwell
where once its kin have trud.
It seeks the ease of water, which becomes
an ideal home, as well.

It climbs a heated rock
the perfect spot on which to bask
and watch all worldly change,
as many seasons turn the clock.
It is the turtles task,
an ancient commission exchange,
to watch and to take stock.
Why is that so? Someone might ask.
It's not so very strange.

Turtles live a long time.
They have survived since dinosaurs,
and carry ancient blood,
which makes their mission most sublime
for observation chores.
Supporting Earth since Noah's flood,
they hold that paradigm
of world gatekeepers keeping score
since crawling from the mud.





Gosh, I didn't realize that I'd come up with this poem, given this simple picture of a small turtle. But as I got into it, several turtle legends came to mind. Both Native American and Asian cultures have creation legends that have the earth being recreated upon a turtle's back after a great flood. Turtles are also ancient since the time of the dinosaurs. There is a rock carving of a turtle above the Delaware River that is described as a "Watcher." It inspired a book by Sheila McGill-Callahan called "And Still the Turtle Watched," in which the turtle observes the comings and goings of the world for millions of years. So I blended these into the poem.

Trud - a variation of the word "trod" (to walk upon, past participle of tread), It is inspired by the use of the word Ã?"drug," a past form of the verb "drag."

This poem is a 6-8 Verse.
6-8 Verse is the reverse of 8-6 metered Ballad verse. It begins with the short 6 syllable line and then gives forth to the 8 syllable line. This format can continue with any number of lines, and use any meter.

For this poem, I used nine line structured stanzas (Nanotets), which I liked because it yields the short line at the beginning, as well as the end. My rhyme scheme is:

a b c a b c a b c

This photograph was taken by the author himself on 10/18/2018.



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